Language

Prepositions

in the exact middle
on to
without
with
with

wound on and on
but not quite straight into the side of
as all the people
opened out of it
first on one side and then on another
were on the same floor
on the same passage
all on the left-hand side (going in)
over his garden
meadows beyond
sloping down to the river

hiding among the millions of books, buried in her reading sat a young girl in her velvet blue chair. following along eagerly with each and every word, not concerning herself with the setting sun or the fluttering page leaves

Show, Don’t Tell

cowering in the corner, lip quivering, hands shaking sat the little boy in his velvet blue chair. jaw clenching as a tear slipped down his cheek, wiping it away angrily as he made up his mind. he wouldn’t feel this way about her again.

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